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Managers' report book, September 13, 1920-December 8, 1921

Page 124

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124 Cuts Continued: Jack Osterman: Please eliminate reference to making changes without screen, "Raiding the Halloways", names of local hotels, "Kissing the clerk", also "Fooling around the girls" expression. Try and express yourself in some other way as it sounds rather suggestive. Bronson & Baldwin: Please eliminate reference to "Vampires B.V.D.'s" and expression "Dirty pup", also the word "God" from the line "for God's Sake sing". Billy Van: Please eliminate the gag in reference to the man jumping our the window.
 
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